My Turn Poem by Nanthinii Mohan

My Turn

Rating: 3.8


That morning! Seemed to arise late
And I was to get up earlier that day;
No time to feel that salubrious ambiance,
And no minute to yawn or relax!
Coz, hundreds and fifties were waiting before my turn!
Yes, it was for the priceless fluid-
Flows like a silver surge on a hosepipe.
Women frenzied with their containers
And men appalling near them!
And I with a nostalgic deliberation-
Pondered why it was made insufficient?
After a series of thoughts-flashed the certainty:
Everything's because of us and only because of us!
Muting myself, moved ahead-unwilling to lose my turn for it!

Monday, September 5, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: nostalgic,silver
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2019

No time to feel that salubrious ambiance, And no minute to yawn or relax! nostalgic deliberation.. what a fine expression and coinage of words together. wonderful. tony

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Beckhammition Shayan 11 March 2012

u made my day, great write......................

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 09 September 2011

Oh I do wonder what that 'Salubrious Ambience' could be... Nicely written, though I'll have to read it several times to fathom what it's about!

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Allemagne Roßmann 06 September 2011

And men appalling near them! And I with a nostalgic deliberation- Salubrious ambience i believe is not created without these lines above..Well done

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