Sunday, February 7, 2010

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I just want to be honest
I’ve made some bad mistakes
Wonder if I held my own ground
I’ll never forget the look on your face
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Christopher's Dead
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Lex Freedman 21 February 2010

This is beautiful. the emtion captured is so raw. love it! last standza is my favorite!

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Serenity Prayer 07 February 2010

ooh, nice twist at the end. i wasnt expecting that. sad and painful write, but a good poem. good job.

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JH Poetry 07 February 2010

I felt the pain! Nice...

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