Tiku akp

My View - Poem by Tiku akp

Ideas churn the mind
Ego makes us blind
Foul mouth draws ire
Bad heart vomits fire
Stout body works hard
Luck often plays its card
Enough to move a step a day
Soon goal does not seem far away

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about My View by Tiku akp

  • Liza Sudina (9/26/2015 10:19:00 AM)

    how wise! step by step - and Lotos pose I've done! (Report) Reply

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/24/2015 5:55:00 AM)

    Verily, ego makes us blind. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/24/2015 2:59:00 AM)

    Very wise point of view... each line is priceless. Great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2015

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