My Visitors And I.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

My Visitors And I..



When a person encroach my territory,
With his mighty and lean muscular tributaries,
I have never realized there are so many others,
Looking for me from the distance with eager eyes,
They are visible to me at night, when he is out,
To the other half in the west, I never felt the cold,
When chatting with the distant visitors with the wand,
Greens are at rest and the blues are up and its best,
Singing the song during the pleasant fireworks,
They hid themselves from the sight, when he arrives,
For the new date, many flowers get shrunk,
A few flowers bloom, my distant visitors not visible.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i like to write poems about the earth and the nature, though I seldom get the comments from readers, which sometimes makes me very uneasy whether it is worth to write poems or not, but I feel very happy, whenever I have the time to login and write something on this screen and many other screens..Thank you for the opportunity..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 January 2014

They hid themselves from the sight, when he arrives There are many onlookers hidden from sight. Nice observation of reality.

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