My Wish Poem by paige shaw

My Wish



Days will come,
Time will pass,
But still with every minute
My love for you burns bright
Engraving deeper in my heart

So long I’ve dreamed
For something right
To feel the love just one time
And in one kiss
You fill my wish, my life, my heart

So to my one and only
To my most valued treasure
I will always be near
No matter how far I may be
I will always love you
No matter how long we part
My wish, my life, my heart
To you i confur my all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amie-Lee ...... 29 April 2008

I agree with Jerry, good work.

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Jerry Hughes 08 April 2008

Excellent first posting Paige, looking forward to more, Jerry

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 March 2008

your admission of love is great and pure................

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 March 2008

If this is your only poem you have to write more because this one is excuse my language 'damned good'. I realy mean that. You have genuine talent for poetry and if you just keep doing this, you will write no bad poems. I hope you will read mine, Not for your pleasure so much as just because I want to know what you think of them. I beg you to do so. GW62

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