Sunday, August 20, 2006

My Words Comments

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My words are slippery as slime
that snails and hagfish ooze,
but should they trip you up in rhyme
I hope they will confuse.
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gershon hepner
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Kelly Allen Vinal 21 August 2006

Fascinating piece, Gershon

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Linda Ori 20 August 2006

Pretty slick piece of writing, Gershon. I like the easy flow and the catchy topic, along with the scientific explanation - quite informative! Thanks! Linda

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Tailor Bell 20 August 2006

nothing keener than the great poem with scientific undertones. very intriguing. -Tailor

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Michael Shepherd 20 August 2006

delicious, humorous, enlightening, and poetic - what more could one ask?

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