My World Poem by Barry Middleton

My World



my world is not the same
my house destroyed by time
my body weak and tired
at least I have my rhyme

although I sense a breeze
my inspiration's verse
has shifted to the west
for better or for worse

the cold has settled in
no fire can warm my night
my vision too must fade
then I will lose the light

above the windy sea
a bird turns to the shore
I watch him while I can
till I can watch no more

I struggled with the storms
I paid a heavy cost
and I will struggle still
till finally all is lost

My World
Wednesday, February 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,death,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 01 February 2017

The vanity stressed by the last two verses though functioning as a philosophical irony and making the whole piece a truthness sub specie eternitatis? ignore the most precious value of this life which is its joyrney we have to make as born in this world beings. And this journey is worth to be experienced, doesn't it?

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Barry Middleton 01 February 2017

Worth being experienced and worth fighting for. Which is often difficult.

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