My World Is You Poem by Suresh Kumar EK

My World Is You

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The world you made for me
Is truly safe and secure
Something shines in
And nothing fades
The world we both honour
Is rightly amazing


From there......
We have mined depths
Beyond the deeps
We have conquered
The great oceans of love
We have walked so far
Beyond the times my dear


No time felt enough for us
Even then they try to
Take me away from you
Hinder me from loving you
They make me bother
About my narrow world around
But they failed to realise
My world is you and
Your world is me.

Wednesday, September 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 September 2020

Write comment. Beautiful poetry, dear poet! It reminds me: Tum hamaare liey ham tumhaare liey, Phir zamaane ka kya hai hamaara na ho. Thanks for sharing.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 09 September 2020

Nice one. May i suggest your last two lines in the last verse appear at the end of the other two verses to act as a draw card to your poem. I think

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