Mysterious Place Poem by Lento Maez

Mysterious Place

Rating: 5.0


I followed the wind today
It took me to a mysterious place
A wonderland of beauty and peace
Flowers waved in the joyful breeze
Playful squirrels gathered nuts
A butterfly caressed my cheek
This made a small tear escape my eye
It fell and bathed a dancing firefly
The swaying willows mesmerized all
A cryptic sign near the waterfall
Proclaimed that here there was no fall
Eternal spring was meant to enthrall
Oh how I wish the wind would say
We welcome you you're free to stay

Wednesday, October 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,firefly,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2013

This is your best poem no doubt, among the ones I've read. A masterpiece! 10/10. 'This made a small tear escape my eye It fell and bathed a dancing firefly' Only original poets can say like this, Professor! How deep is your imagination, I wonder! You've made my day, with this beautiful, soothing poem, to proceed on. Thanks. K A

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Sandra Regan 30 October 2013

Very nice imagery. Please check out my poems if you have time.

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