N- Week-End Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

N- Week-End

Rating: 4.6


Long was proceeded week-end of moon...
Long was proceeded... devilish a rain so...
All the same, wonderful smells is felt the....
Everywhere got wet mimosas, mimosas
Lovely smiles... as babes of the sun...
Morning asterisks sings as sleepy-by:
-Week-end has come to...come to an end...
Long live...long live, whom, moon's or the sun's...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 13 March 2009

A nice flow to this, and it is an uplifting happy write, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Catrina Heart 09 March 2009

nice flow of the week has to start and has to end...beautiful imagery...10+++

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Fiona Davidson 09 March 2009

Beautiful words Tsira...as always a treat to read....10++

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