Naked, Not Nude Poem by gershon hepner

Naked, Not Nude

Rating: 5.0


The nude reveals her naked skin,
looking healthy, free and fresh,
but the naked girl will win
more attention with her flesh,
gaining sympathy for sin.
It’s the private revelation
of the feelings she reveals
which excite imagination
that the nude’s bare skin conceals,
Cheshire cat without a grin.

2/13/06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hugh Cobb 13 February 2006

Gershon, this is a wonderful piece of verse. I agree, naked always trumps nude because nude always seems to be holding something back while naked puts it all out there with gusto! Bravo! (10 from me, leering lasciviously) Hugh

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Raynette Eitel 13 February 2006

hmmmm...you may be right! I love the last line, Gershon! Raynette

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