Narcissuses Poem by Madathil Rajendran Nair

Narcissuses

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They sat on either side
Of the walkway
Dozing catatonics
Fixated to smart phone screens
Some happy, some unhappy
With their own clumsy selfies

In saturnine pose
Curled up
Like Narcissus of yore
Enamored by his own image
On the placid waters of a pool

As crumbling walkers
Walked and walked
To distant health hidden
Somewhere on receding horizons
Earphones plugged
Into their ears
Looks dazed into yonder skies
Unaware of what was on
Around the walking streak
Listening to music
Or what amused
A beloved's chirp
Hymns, spiritual burp

A world lost to technology
Sound and sight
Sans any soul
Inner abode or eye

People of straw
Like a summer drizzle
Who can't a world make
Abounding on the outside
That, alas, has no inside
Losing themselves to the tricks
Of the stealthy seductress
Technological advance

Or is it all wrong?
Is this the way species evolve?
Darwin may have the last laugh

These zombies may at last
Evolve and long last
In a scenario we can't forecast
A lotos land of the lost
Where it is always afternoon
With no night or forenoon
As flowers in full bloom
God, please give them the Moon

Narcissuses
Wednesday, April 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I just walked amidst them. They didn't know I passed by.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 05 September 2016

How true. In today's world, everybody is a Narcissus, whether he/she is indulging in selfies or not. Nobody has time for others, the way we had, in the old days. Very beautiful poem. and quite instructive for thenew gen. But do they listen?

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Jaishree Nair 11 May 2016

well described the new generation.Glued to the screens they are oblivious of the surroundings like zombies.thanks.

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Valsa George 29 April 2016

It is depressing to see the peoples' addiction to cell phones and the youngsters' mad craze for selfies! We the elder generation often wonder where the world is heading to with all the 'zombies' who are oblivious of what is happening around them and indifferent to every one around! I too share your anxiety! Great write!

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Kamal Kothari 29 April 2016

Zombies is the right word, nice poem :)

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Kelly Kurt 27 April 2016

It has become an epidemic. Either fixated on the small display or focusing it on themselves, oblivious to the reality around them

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