Nature Poem by adam palmquist

Nature

Rating: 4.8


The lone animal is chased,

blood is pumping,

Fast breaths with scents of fear,

and the trail is fresh.

The hopeful sun sinks to the horizon,

darkness upon earth.

The prey runs into the shade of trees,

but is not safe.

The beast's desire grows,

Sensing the fate of its victim.

Malice is the only path for survival.

Death is coming.

The animal screams as teeth rip into its flesh,

it convulses with pain, it cries for help.

No mercy,

no escape,

NATURE!

Thursday, March 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 February 2016

The animal screams as teeth rip into its flesh, it convulses with pain, it cries for help. No mercy, no escape so cruel is nature......... so full of goodness and kindness and beauty too is nature........ here your dramatic portrayal of cruelty in nature made me very thoughtful. tony

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Roseann Shawiak 18 October 2015

A gripping poem of nature, beautiful but brutally honest, letting us feel the terror of death coming upon an animal about to be eater. Very well written, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kelly Kurt 03 May 2015

Nature can be brutal in its beauty. Well penned here

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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2015

The brutal hide and seek of the jungle, a game of survival of the fittest well depicted in the poem. A nice piece of poetry written with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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