Nature Comments

The animal screams as teeth rip into its flesh, it convulses with pain, it cries for help. No mercy, no escape so cruel is nature......... so full of goodness and kindness and beauty too is nature........ here your dramatic portrayal of cruelty in nature made me very thoughtful. tony

A gripping poem of nature, beautiful but brutally honest, letting us feel the terror of death coming upon an animal about to be eater. Very well written, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Nature can be brutal in its beauty. Well penned here

The brutal hide and seek of the jungle, a game of survival of the fittest well depicted in the poem. A nice piece of poetry written with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.