Friday, April 15, 2016

Nature Of Haiku Comments

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painful to compose
quick to read, touches the soul;
are we in kyoto?
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 April 2016

Haiku well defined with some elaboration! Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 15 April 2016

A haiku about haiku, and very well done

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Govind Ramakrishnan 15 April 2016

My plan is to write a senryu about a senryu. Thanks for your kind words.

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Gil Highlander 15 April 2016

Are we in Kyoto? Took me back to my trip to Japan a few years back. I must admit after reading haiku it's hard to read long winded poetry. Brevity, brevity and more brevity

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Stephen Park 15 April 2016

Another clever one, it rolls of the tongue pretty smoothly. Thanks for sharing

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