painful to compose
quick to read, touches the soul;
are we in kyoto?
© 2016
My plan is to write a senryu about a senryu. Thanks for your kind words.
Are we in Kyoto? Took me back to my trip to Japan a few years back. I must admit after reading haiku it's hard to read long winded poetry. Brevity, brevity and more brevity
Another clever one, it rolls of the tongue pretty smoothly. Thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Haiku well defined with some elaboration! Thanks for sharing.