Saturday, October 11, 2014

Nature's Love Story Comments

Rating: 4.5

She called his name but he could not hear
So she watered the Earth with her tears.
From these tears rivers flowed
Came the salty oceans of which we know.
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Hans Vr 11 October 2014

Wow, Mariam, this poem is so touching, so full of imagination and warm feeling. I do not hesitate to call this poem a masterpiece. Well done.

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Mariam de Haan

Mariam de Haan

Pemba, Tanzania
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