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Though I'm not her father
I'll always take care of her
with intercession and prayer
And though ‘am not a good singer
I will sing to soothe her.

Every day and every night
I will comfort her with genuine love
Pray to God to make her feel alright
I'll treat her like a precious dove,
honor her today and respect her endlessly.

I will serve her all my life
From now on today
'til her hair turns grey
I will cultivate her lavishly
Water her with God's words
And help her produce good fruits.
Tuesday, April 24, 2012
Kalpana Shah 24 September 2013
neatly penned... do read my contest poem and vote for it.. quite similar to yours
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Bri Edwards 23 September 2013
i can only wonder whom you are writing about.....or about whom you are writing [my english teacher would have told me to NOT put about at the end of the sentence! ]. this is nice. i envy the her....i think. thanks for sharing. ;) what is the origin of the title? ?
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Roseann Shawiak 23 September 2013
Good write. Your feelings show you have true love at heart and will always cherish it - even when older. Keep writing.
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Sheena Datta 27 May 2012
Mother Earth deserves it and you say it so well.
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Aditya Gupta 26 May 2012
u seem to be a great lover, nd the one u r gonna be with wud be lucky.
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Wabi Sabi 25 May 2012
it feels powerfully passionate and georgeously sexy.
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Kimberly Mitchell 25 May 2012
This is very sweet! I like the flow of it, and, again your use of the language is great.
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Alicia Meyers 24 May 2012
Fantastic poem! :) A guy like that is perfect for a girl; respect, loving, caring, and a gentlemen. I'm sure you'll get her. :)
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Marilyn George 24 May 2012
I like this poem as it seems to play on words - at one point it can be the desire to value the one you love, on the other hand it seems to personify Mother Earth - and the desire to value her in nature.
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well personified..........
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