Today I choose to rise
like a strong mountain
Leaving my bed of demise
Never will I again be shaken
Of hope and courage, a million rays
have opened my eyes
and strenthened my bones
So come hell or high water
I've become a fortified tower
Lifes lessions are hard to take but lead us ever forward write on my friend write on
Great message expressed here, to rise above adversity. Well said.
It was pretty good, I thought. However, I am a man of sadder endings.
Absolutely brilliant a fantastic piece of writing.. pls pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my to..
A different and strong poem, with inspiring thoughts, 'For I was made in the image of greatness'. Marvellous.
From what I have read so far, this is your best poem, in my opinion. 'I can do greater things'-this is the true spirit of a poet.
It is a poem of great determination having stunning and touching expression. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A strong poem from the heart.