Need Poem by C.S. Keskuela

Need



i know it is wrong
but you are my song
my soul feels lighter when i see your smile
my heart it does beguile

i wake
i dream
everywhere there you are
shining in my world the brightest star
i sleep
i work
i live
conversations with you constant in my head
i fear they will only stop when i am dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 07 January 2010

oh i can see that you have a unique pattern on presenting the lines with rhymes... you remind me of the young poet who died years ago named 'Mattie Stepaneck' and he has a great poem titled 'I AM'... anyway, nice poem!

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Nikunj Sharma 07 January 2010

good poem, expressing your feelings and obsession....good work

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