Needing Structure Comments

Several of my poems have multiple meanings. This is one of them. Even the composition of this poem loses its 'structure' towards the end. Thanks for your comments. Much appreciated.

Patience is a virtue, or so they say. I wonder, have they ever really been in a hurry. Very nice write Lawrence. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

poetically meaningful to me. take care. got to go now. i need to trash/redo/ edit some of my stuff. one should really looove their craft.