Neither Poetry Nor Prose Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Neither Poetry Nor Prose

Rating: 5.0


It is neither poetry nor prose
All is well intended to suppose
Some tragedy or some feeling with facts
For human being to read it and act

I was all along writing
With open mind and fighting
With set norms of mind
To infuse some thought of new kind

It has worked to some extent
As I have tried to live in present
With people and their plight
That makes them to sweat more for delight

Life had been always challenging
Posing threat with skill of rightly managing
Not that everybody is born with silver spoon
Somebody is gifted with luck of working under blazing sun

These bare facts are to be highlighted
As they stand open and quiet related
They have interlinked with human nature
That shapes bright or dim future

The simple look of poor person makes us to feel pain
Even though we may not have the idea to remain
With his plight or try for some immediate relief
But we feel pity and show intention with good belief

I would love to reflect those sufferings
That needs some kind of offering
Not in kind but with best means to provide alternate
That can make him to feel kind instead of any hate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It is neither poetry nor prose All is well intended to suppose

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Reava Nuecome5 minutes ago thank you for that. Comment +1 Not lacking in depth

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VERY GOOD Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi4 minutes ago good poem............. Comment +1 thoughtful

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Ty Finnigan3 minutes ago Excellent work and beautifully put. What a creative angle! The ONLY problem I had was the meter. The Depth sort of dominated to the point of suffocating the balance of language. Comment +1 Well written

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Tonya Dowling5 minutes ago Nicely stated. Comment +1 nicely done

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akio yamoto6 minutes ago I liked it good job

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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