here i'm drowning in the tears of my memory...
wondering thinking who i'm gonna be...
that because when you left you tooke a big part of me...
my heart and my soul are still in your property...
its like i have to build myself again...
but i really dont know where to begin...
but at least i know how it ends...
that you and I will NEVER be friends..
this is pretty good. just has a lot of spelling errors... otherwise it has a nice rhythm. good write!
yes how it ends never be friends never be friend of not 'her' or 'him' and anybody else superb! ! 10 times rated 10! ! write some more Dana! ..Ali
I think just about everyone can relate to this poem... nicely written yet so sad...
I agree with jaye. this is really really good. and you should be proud that you can write like this: ]
wow x i think at the age of 16 you should be very proud. its a really good poem, really touching, xx
there are times and fights when one thinks he/she can never be friend with friend he/she is in fight with.................though many regret it later...........hope that's not your case good work
agreed with your bold idea..love it and appreciate your expressions, , , well doen 10+++++++++
really bold, but i hope u havnt jumped into conclusions like this too fast1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this poem scared me whilst reading it.. as i had some unsettle waters with my friend, who has our name.. i hope it is not prophetic.. watch your spelling n tenses.. but good poem.