i was living in the darkness where no's one there
i cried so loudly but no one cares..
i rose my head up to see the blue sky but it was grey..
i didnt say anything cause i didnt know what to say..
day by day was passing me by
and i thought its the time to say goodbye..
but then a strange voice was calling my name
i wanted to follow it but i was afraid it was a flame..
i didnt have so many choices so i tried to give it a chance..
i left my weakness behind me cause i wanted to take a glance..
when i reached out and touched the sky
i realize that it was real so i couldnt deny..
the voice was you after all
so i thank you for being my wake up call..
yes no one cares... and we should learn to smile on this careless situation! ! nice poem fellow...10+
a beautiful writting with beautiful emoions little poet..10++++
very optimistic and brave. You deserved the call. I hope you can make it last. Good job, Dana.
wakes me smile: D......i think i need a wake up call: P......well written! excellent flow and make up: D 10+++
well written work realise ourself is the courage and strength that is great now, thanks,10+
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I would like to translate this poem
wonderful lines, deep meaning thanks for sharing continue writing