Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Never Mine - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You were never mine
Still I felt fine
As it was my opinion
To make you companion

It is your wish
That shall finish
All uncertainty
That compels me to feel misery

It was your impressive style
That attracted me for a while
I dreamed sweetly about close link
But soon made me to sink

I think it was completely irritable
I struggled
And tried to come off
But there was no option other than to laugh

Yes love and war
Both eludes me far
I don’t know how to approach
But mind wonders in position as such

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 9:49:00 PM)

    welcome 'Lola del Rosario
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 9:47:00 PM)

    Aruna Lakra very true in real life
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 4:45:00 AM)

    agdish Sahai Sharma · Friends with Shalini Samuel
    Dear brother Hasmukhmehta
    Glad to know.that
    u r a good poet.
    I find humour in ur poem.
    Loving.
    Thanks.
    Best wishes.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 4:37:00 AM)

    welcome poet ariel Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 4:33:00 AM)

    Don't rhyme, and stop trying to be all cute. You wrote love and war in the same line, no one who knows love or war puts them as equals, you are shameful. No one compels you if you have never been drafted for war, compels you to be away from your love? Pathetic.
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/14/2015 12:17:00 AM)

    This poem speaks about a man's secret love that he nurtured and when revealed the result was expected pain, agony and suffering, Nicely put together in five stanzas. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/13/2015 10:08:00 PM)

    Yes love and war
    Both eludes me far
    I don’t know how to approach
    But mind wonders in position as such
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 13, 2015



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