New And Old Poem by Barry Middleton

New And Old

Rating: 5.0


Young lover's days
are an indulgence.
Perfumed moods,
heat and passion,
are a passing dance.

Time's gift
is a tender kiss
against
the moon's
long stay.

Times gift,
the comfort of giving,
is fair recompense
for lasting love.

Newest love is shaped
in sunlit air,
but love is long
when time
increases care.

Sunday, May 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 16 May 2016

Passionate and sensual poem, nicely penned.

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Barry Middleton 16 May 2016

Thank you Mohammed. I am glad you liked it.

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Nosheen Irfan 16 May 2016

You have beautifully put two sides of love. Love has phases. New and old love are not the same. Care n giving are the key to lasting love. Youthful love has passion n energy but old age love has maturity n comfort.

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Barry Middleton 16 May 2016

Thank you Nosheen. That is it exactly.

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