Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 495,278 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

New Cycle - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

New cycle

The plate was hit hard
It was time to pass word
New born was accepted with joy
Everybody was happy at arrival and enjoyed

The sound of plate gave notice of my arrival
New entry of child with holy soul
How many expectations from a new born?
As if God had descended from heaven

The future was tied with baby boy
Plenty of things around and new toys
That was how the days were to go
The wind had new impact with its blow

What was expected then did not happen
The parents were already driven
By future calculations
The boy had new rules and regulations

The time and tide shall wait for none
The expectations were now turning into real one
The boy was expected to deliver on simple lines
Even though it was not clearly defined

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2016 5:24:00 AM)


    Ahmed Micheal Lawal likes this. Comments welcome Like · Reply · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2016 5:24:00 AM)


    Parupudi Satyavenkatavinodkumar What a way to express through a protagonist Dear Hasmukh Mehta Jee...... Thank you so much __/\__ Like · Reply · 1 · 4 hrs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/29/2016 5:24:00 AM)


    welcome Scott Ransopher and Ahmed Micheal Lawal like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • (1/28/2016 10:55:00 PM)


    The time and tide shall wait for none
    The expectations were not turning into real one.
    Fantastic lines giving eternal truth. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/28/2016 5:47:00 PM)


    The time and tide shall wait for none
    The expectations were now turning into real one
    The boy was expected to deliver on simple lines
    Even though it was not clearly defined
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2016



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