Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

New Dimension - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I fully agree with discarding the "ism"
Not disregarding totally their "ism"
As it has remained age old tradition
To confine with one and only condition

We are no authority to malign
Not to force any one to align
Wrap up in our thoughts
Some of the lessons forcibly taught

Let individual sticks to his own belief
Trust and profess that gives him relief
For worldly worries and tension
So it will be worthless for anything to mention

Yes nationalism has something greater role
Unity is must among population for honest call
To Breath for universal love and to profess
The kind of "ism" that has not been heard on surface

Love for country by people is understandable
But blind faith and "ism" for forcing others is condemnable
Here comes point of conflict where it assumes significance
Then it can't be discarded outright or at once

In my opinion there is greater role for humanism
This "ism" is holier than any other "ism"
It is not folly and should not be considered as such wholly
It is above all "isms" and so to be considered holy

No clever argument can push this "ism" in corner
It has to be realized sooner or later
Some of the intelligent people try to create confusion
It comes not out of pity but just out of infusion

Think of immense relief reaching to affected people
From all corners of world to the people in trouble
No religion or "ism" tag for rendering assistance
It is human face that is rushing without taking any chance

It is certainly not a new dogma
It is like fountain and flora
It flows from human heart with new dimension
Just waiting to show its class with worthless mention


Comments about New Dimension by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (8/20/2012 1:34:00 AM)


    A wonder of a poem full of meaning in every line.I enjoyed the poem written with rhyme and reason.so well. Thank you, Sir. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/20/2012 1:29:00 AM)


    A marvelous poem with great meaning The linesThere is greater role for humanism / This 'ism' is holier than any other ism are very true.and it touches the heart.I enjoyed your poem totally. Marks-10+++++Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (8/20/2012 1:21:00 AM)


    This is 'thepoem! Marvelous! The words there is greater role for humanism / This ism is holier than any other ism are true words which touch the heart. I loved the poem immensely and read it again and again.Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 1:03:00 AM)


    Abdul Wahab wisedom and experience tell in this poem, marvellous!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 1:02:00 AM)


    Diwakar Pokhriyal very true sir.............The only ism one should follow is Human-ism.......because this ism sees the togetherness and those who believes in this always takes everyone with them: -) ....................beautifully crafted poem: -)
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/20/2012 12:48:00 AM)


    It is certainly not a new dogma
    It is like fountain and flora
    It flows from human heart with new dimension
    Just waiting to show its class with worthless mention
    (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/20/2012 12:47:00 AM)


    you are great 10 (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/20/2012 12:47:00 AM)


    It is certainly not a new dogma
    It is like fountain and flora
    It flows from human heart with new dimension
    Just waiting to show its class with worthless mention
    - you are great 10
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 12:37:00 AM)


    Yes, quite strong


    Fred Lassonde5 minutes ago
    Imagery
    Comment 0
    a strong message
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 12:36:00 AM)


    Me9 minutes ago
    it's a strong message that you are putting out there....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2012 12:28:00 AM)


    I fully agree with discarding the “ism”
    Not disregarding totally their “ism”
    As it has remained age old tradition
    To confine with one and only condition
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2012



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