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New Recruit

Rating: 3.6
tortured souls walk through this place
i look at face after face
and in each one i see a piece of me
their futures we try to foresee
and failiures we try to prevent
their time in hell not yet spent
so we hand them a rifle and uniform
they're sparkling boots not yet worn
as they stand proud on parade
not yet been on their first crusade
their families so proud
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djean Whitney 22 March 2009
Got that right you are so good, keep writing! you write it ill read it!
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Marilyn Lott 31 May 2007
Katie, you have a wonderful writing style. This is so hearfelt and well put, puts your reader right into the moment. Keep writing. Marilyn
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