New Year Sunrise Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

New Year Sunrise



first day sunrise

cloudy with a

splash of sunshine

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this in 2012 and it popped up on Facebook this morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 01 January 2016

Nice haiku. Must be it's time if it popped up. You may want to check out my haikus.

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I just edited this one and the correction isn't showing..the last line is: splash of sunshine..

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it took a couple of minutes and the correction showed up..great way to start off the new year but then Mercury is going retrograde so that will cause some communication problems..

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Lily Yang 01 January 2016

good luck to you, the first day sunrise

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