Nice Poetry Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Nice Poetry

Rating: 5.0


All along the way, I cried fowl
It was cry in desert and simple crawl
No one heard me when I said about mutual admiration
It was beginning of bad relation

Poetry is not for mutual admiration
It has its own fragrance and exhilaration
If some one writes it for self praise
Readers may offer scant respect with bad chase

It has helped in no way
The spirit behind it vapors away
Many requests come for appraisal of poem
I pay no respect and turn them down

I read daily and pass comments
It gives me tremendous happiness and enjoyment
It has two advantages of unique kind
It helps to compose another good poem with new find

Yes so mutual admiration drives to desperation
It raised so many question marks in relation
It takes you no where near the reader’s mind
They simply ignore you and take no note as blind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

All along the way, I cried fowl It was cry in desert and simple crawl

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Gajanan Mishra 30 December 2013

wonderful and heart touching, thanks. I must take note of it sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

Maria Gracia Revilla32 minutes ago Keep writing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

Maricela Ramírez and Mitos Jane Nepomuceno like this. Maricela Ramírez Nice! 10 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

good Helen Setta 23 minutes ago Poetry is not for mutual admiration.... Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

Very good poem John Callaghan27 minutes ago Very well wrote although it seemed like an assault on poetry and those who write it. I myself though am uneducated and do not understand most of what I read. I just love words.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

GOOD ANTHONY CHARLES HOUNDMAN BLAKE30 minutes ago WRITE ON Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 December 2013

EXCELLENT Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi31 minutes ago we must read every ones work and pass comments to improve further Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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