Nice Presence Here Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Nice Presence Here



Nice presence

I can be seen here
It is taken few years back in some somewhere
Not knowing what lies ahead
But I was fresh and well read

No abnormity in body
It was all goody goodies
I felt fresh with no worries
It was normal chariot to carry

I read much and wrote too
Now readers had realized it too through
My verses and poems
As I put it to them daily

Continuous work whenever found time
It was all for them
I put whatever I could gather in mind
It was memory rewind

What I feel today
No freshness but unwillingness to stay
In life itself for feeling continuous pain
Left foot is jammed and keeps me confined

Still I write
And fight
But hope not loosing fight
I am really down and not feeling right

One reader wrote
Don't bring pen down and always quote
Keep us enriched with experience
I feel their urge and always have in mind nice presence

Nice Presence Here
Saturday, April 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 April 2017

your poems are so good, I feel a good pleasure for your presence. In poemhunter you should be the next best poet because you are a competition to other greatest poets....people will be inspired of your good work. We are learning a lot from you and the work you do is one of the best. it Is a good pleasure to have you here friend! ! ! ! ! ! I honour you because of your work and I can share your poems to my family and friends. Your presence here matters especially for people like us. I am your fan and everything you wrote it is what I'm pleased of. God bless you and protect your genius hand and thoughts. Peace!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2017

welcome rob engley Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2017

welcome nick burnett Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2017

One reader wrote Don’t bring pen down and always quote Keep us enriched with experience I feel their urge and always have in mind nice presence

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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