Friday, July 10, 2009

Night Life. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The estuary smiled at the sunset, tide
Washing in gently meant summer's day waned.
I walked the bank admiring the scene beside
Small misty beach, tidal fields always gain
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Chaos soon reigned when for a while fish offered Wild silver-spin dancing, dusk saw them begin.... beautiful descripion of evens in so natural way... i liked it most and appriciate it...10 read mine miss i miss u, serious thoughts....

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Bob Gibson 10 July 2009

A feeding frenzy was taking place right before your eyes it must have been a sight to see under twilight skies

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Susan Bagley 10 July 2009

Wow! I wish I could have b een witness to this and am glad you were and saw fit to share it with us. Great write, perfect description that allows the reader to be there with you. Thank you, Susan

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a very sweet, beautiful poem..with soothing tone and images..excellent way of writing..truly loved it

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Ian Bowen 10 July 2009

Fay, great atmosphere in your well crafted piece. I love it when poets take me to places I have never been.10/10 Ian

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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