Night Stutters Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Night Stutters

Rating: 5.0


I lay on top of the bed, quilt clenched tight
knuckled white paler in face, to wait.
I wait every nite, my nites run into a mile
measured backward into me.
I know I am the last inch, the best inch, the
inch that tastes the best.
I also know that by now, every inch of that
mile has been uncovered, to look while I
sleep.
I hear a voice, never the same, it paces my
sleep, slowing it down, then I leap...
Into one more day of stuttering in wait, it
takes my breath away, this wait, for the nite
to finish the last inch it's retreat...into.........
I would never harm it, it keeps me safe....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aaron Eliad 04 May 2009

your way of writing is very well posed and well put, i like how you repetitively phrased 'inches' as if everything like people and pieces of time are much smaller than they actually are.keep up the good writing =D

0 0 Reply

Interesting, I don't know what to say about it, though it is very good.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Close
Error Success