Saturday, December 1, 2007

Night, The Elegant Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

Night. The gentle hush on
Tiptoe, looking here...
Looking there...finding
Leaves on the ground
...
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elysabeth faslund
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 02 December 2007

Beautiful poetry Elysabeth, great imagery in words...10

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Margery Rehman 02 December 2007

Elysabeth, This is very beautiful, soothing and has serenity; also has a romantic touch. Reminds me of Shelley's(?) moon walking the night in her silvery shoon. Love, Margery.

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Chris Mendros 01 December 2007

This is beautiful: rich imagery, elegant wording, and just a touch of the eerie. Great work, 'Lisbeth.

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Thad Wilk 01 December 2007

Elysabeth! Night, The Elegant Lady, tends her job well! Beautiful write! *10*! ! ! Thad

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Raveendran . 01 December 2007

Night hosted a hurricane. Nature's meticulous Pruning. ______________ I like the contrast

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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