Nightmare Poem by Koti Bri

Nightmare

Rating: 3.5


Rain flowing down my cheeks
hearing nothing but painful shrieks.
Dark shadows garding the exit
with nothing to do but forfeit.
Giving up so eaisly in the game of fear
wishing this would all just disappear.
Walking around in this deserted place
with no way to escape.
Feeling like a prisoner, traped and scared
but i will always be prepared.
With my sweaty palms and bloody knees
i fight to get rid of this horrible disease.
I wake up, thinking this was all just a bad dream
but then again nothing is as it seems.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rivers O'Donahue 20 January 2009

Great Poem... I loved the last sentence the most.... Nightmares, dreams, reality, it's all the same.

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Joseph Poewhit 22 November 2008

Captures the horror of disease

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Charmaine Sinclair 22 November 2008

I like this poem because it reflects a nightmare very well, and the strange unableness to wake up and rise from it, until it lets you go; and even then, it seems to cling like wisps.

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Koti Bri

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Kanass city, MO
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