Nightwatch Poem by mimi brown

Nightwatch

Rating: 5.0


I wait at night
for the man to come.
Tired of daylight dawning.
Eyes blinded wide
in deep resistance.
Warm coffee, acrid lips
bitter lung cannot
breathe a breath.
I wait at night
for the man to come;
the eyes have lost the colors
of darkness to blue,
too red to see.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bele Lele 07 August 2009

Very interesting, different than others, well written.10+

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Adi Cox 05 August 2009

This was an interesting read and the words feel like they where written with heart felt conviction. The creative use of colour gives a vibrant ending to your poem. Excellent 10/10.

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