Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 482,234 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No Castle In Air - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Never try to build castle in air
As it may not look fair
Your feet will not be placed firmly on ground
The wish for great empire will never be found

It is said “slow and steady wins the race”
There may be set back in some of the stray cases
Ultimately your hard work pays in the long run
For retaining the peace you need not use the gun

When you have reached top
Try to retain position and never stop
But at the same time show no kind of disrespect
As fame and fortune tends to show and act

Step by step you try to cross over
Any hurdle that is causing fear
Wearing you apart and discouraging quest
Try to be firm and perform the best

As good beginner you may learn
The tactics with key to turn
From failure to success
As you may have full access

Comments about No Castle In Air by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/19/2013 8:52:00 PM)


    Michelle Hadley6 minutes ago
    I love the message! Very nice poem and gives encouragement in a time where not a single person is without struggle
    Comment +1
    love the art
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/19/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Michael Ben10 minutes ago
    Nice poem
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/19/2013 8:37:00 PM)

    Never try to build castle in air
    As it may not look fair
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 20, 2013

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