No, I Don'T Feel Poem by Neela Nath Das

No, I Don'T Feel

Rating: 4.8


Yesterday and today
are entangled as
inevitable truth.
Love, laughter, rivalry
the same, and behind
this the spider-string
sticky as it sprang
as saliva from a spider
attentive to catch
its prey.
No, I don't feel
I could run away
from this and that.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhishek Tiwari 19 October 2013

Waao.. that was lovely outpouring madam.. I hope I have guessed right about the Spider But It woud b great If you'll make it more clear...

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Heather Wilkins 27 October 2013

sometimes we do get caught in the spider web. Difficult to get loose good read

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David Wood 26 October 2013

A beautiful inspirational poem, delightful to read.

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Dauntless Aberrants 22 October 2013

You have expressed the thought in such a wonderful way. We are all so bound and entwined between this yesterday & today. We live our lives based on the yesterdays experiences put in today's situation. Its all a cycle of karma, I feel. We keep shuttling between these two. Thanks mam. :)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 October 2013

We are all surrounded by a web. String of a web is just a representation. Living freely is a chore. Nicely expressed. Thank you.

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Neela Nath Das 19 October 2013

Abhishek, thanks for your comment.There's no mystery behind it.This is not only the P.H world from where we pick our emotional experience.If I stay here half an hour, I have to stay rest hours with my personal work and with our society or place of occupation.Sometimes, we pour down others' emotion in our poems.Almost poems are objective.It may seem it's from sudden outburst.But, it's not true.Now-a-days, I can't come here.It doesn't mean, I 'm not writing poems.

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