No Isolation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

No Isolation

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Oh it was burning desire
I have no words to admire
It just entered mind
Made me drawn and almost blinded

You were near
With almost no fear
Inviting in fold
You were creating beautiful world

You spoke as if were undressed
There was uneasy calm and shine on face
I was sinking with your magical charm
I hurriedly gripped with fear of no harm

What a feel of heavenly access!
The happiness could be found with trace
You are almost eye to eye
I need not have forced try

Fight was all for us
Delight was all there to share with trust
I begged nothing but surrender
You willingly came under

Rest is capture of kingdom
The happiness is experienced seldom
You are giving away virginity kingdom
I have full right over you with freedom

I feel no lust but fulfillment
It is heavenly commitment
It was never a mad rush in anticipation
It was bond with perfect relation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

Oh it was burning desire I have no words to admire

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

true Tina Ross3 minutes ago the writing needs work but keep writing Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

Good Carli Woodyear3 minutes ago It's nice, keep it up!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

I like it! Joseph Menslage4 minutes ago Well done! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

nice Sheikh Nissar4 minutes ago great

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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