No Lemon Poem by Donnie Wolff

No Lemon

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes as the loss of ill timed fate.
Your voice as the soft sensual heartbreak.
Your tears as the time of have never been.
Your smile as the thought I think to see again.
Your hands as untouched as your soul appears to be.
I think your beautiful and amazing...
could I have a large ice tea.

Monday, January 9, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
(De Va) 11 January 2012

This is wonderful.......I do so love this, and.....please....pass me another ice tea.....hehe...

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2020

Your eyes as the loss of ill timed fate. Your voice as the soft sensual heartbreak. Your tears as the time of have never been Infatuation, sensuality, love. a fine poem. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 November 2018

Your smile as the thought I think to see again. Your hands as untouched as your soul appears to be. I think your beautiful and amazing... i smiled as i read your poem. example is beautiful . love and its sentiments and desire. tony

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Toni Bjorgansen 19 September 2014

The last part was very clever. As someone else said, the bait and switch technique was very well done.

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Brian Jani 24 May 2014

Nice poem Lonnie I love it

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Sara Fielder 30 April 2012

This is my favorite of yours...say what you will but I just love the bait and switch technique you used here. I hope you are still writing.

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