I hear the rain,
and your voice sound.
I feel the thunder,
And your heart pound.
With a tear I pray,
in a sky still blue.
Because the rain,
reminds me of you.
For rains and love have been intertwined, smell of wet earth your breath on mine....u write so tenderly beautifully gracefully
the rain reminds me of you. falling in love on a rainy night is special. nice write
Dear Donnie Wolff, With a very good rhythm your rain is nice to me and I wish now i am in it! Sophy Chen
With a tear I pray, in a sky still blue. Because the rain, reminds me of you. love and longing so very well expressed in endearing terms and a beautiful prayer.... thank u dear. tony
Writing is a very cathartic process. I found myself waking at around 2am the other evening and penning close to thirty poems... sometimes that's the way we, as writers heal... a beautiful poem, Donnie. Keep writing.
You have so beautifully expressed your love. Rain and love, they seem so connected. Well penned.
The pain-rain so wonderfully penned. Thank you for sharing the the beautiful poem.
Thank you, seems to be the most popular on here and elsewhere. Everything written is true. My life.. I wrote this at 6 in the morning in a thunderstorm on her birthday as we had broken up the day before. Though that remained that way, the poetry the moment now lives beyond all of us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful poem, very honest and touching. love it.