No Name Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

No Name

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No name

Had name yet she did not
-Lena; was no more since
-had husband badly sick
-all alone and in need
-and people kept calling
-and kids were hungry
-had no mood for cooking.

Lena has no name since
-is sample,
-and remains; yes, she will.

That is all!

Monday, December 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: human condition
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2017

LAST PART: Thank you for sharing this greatest tragedy, WHY must KIDS always be the ones who are suffering the most. Parents, never plan kids if you don´t want to care seriously for them. They are innocent. A ten Vote.

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Nassy Fesharaki 22 December 2017

Yes Sylvia...I take such a blame with shame...

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2017

Am thinking of the KIDS, they are the victims of the constant quarrels between husband and wife OR between partners who have already kids, the mother could be sick because of alcohol OR the father is an alcoholic too, either the one or the other, OF BOTH, then there would be no poem at all. The theme is super but the words are not as clear as I am accustomed of reading poems.

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Nassy Fesharaki 22 December 2017

I am reading a book, which is what the fourth child of a family is addressing his father...pain, pain, pain...and all, in a way, parents' fault.

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