No, Never, Not In This World….. Poem by Ruchi chaurasiya
No, Never, Not In This World…..
No, never, not in this life
Not on earth, not on sky or anywhere else in this world
Yes, I fell, I scatter and broke
I tried, I cried and finally hold myself
Billions of smiles and I choose him
Billions of hands and I hold his
I was finished when he started
He had me since he said hello for very first time
That hello didn't even promised a goodbye
My destination was a journey for him
So no, never not in this life again
Not on earth, not on sky or anywhere else in this world
Will not fall, will not scatter and will not be broke again
No never, not in this life I will hold any hand again
I tried, I cried and this time I finally forgive
It's not me it's him who missed the moon while counting stars.
So no, never, not in this world.
my favorite of your lines: It's not me it's him who missed the moon while counting stars. i would make some minor changes in the English, but shall/will not bother to mention now; ask me if you want to hear my suggestions. 4th line: i'm not sure if you mean hold or told. either one is ok with me. :) (cont.)
Will not fall, will not scatter and will not be broke again No never, not in this life I will hold any hand again I tried, I cried and this time I finally forgive.....missing the moon while counting stars...... beautiful expressions. painful experiences and the thoughts and convictions and determinations that lead to decision..... a fine poem. tony
The most beautiful lines in this praiseworthy poems are as I feel... That hello didn't even promised a goodbye My destination was a journey for him Wow Ruchi, keep it up. You are a modern poet indeed. 10+++++
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12/10/2024 6:44:09 PM # 1.0.0
(cont.) I was finished when he started i think you mean that, from the start of the relationship, you were fated to be 'broken' by it/him. and now you don't plan to 'fall' or 'break' again. see that you DON'T! ! ! BUT maybe you will, and then you can try to be even MORE careful the next time. i HOPE and think that you again will 'hold a hand'. bri :) to MyPoemList.