Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 382,636 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No Words To Push - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I have no words to push
As mind has stopped the rush
It fails to create impression
What is use of my obsession?

I may think lots of things
It may be irrelevant for any kind of thinking
Why should I thrust upon their intelligent mind?
Readers are brave enough to think and find

Never think you are the only one person
That thinks of high ideology with reasons
Others are not merely meant for at receiving end
They may speak less or not react as reader friend

I still may want to probe their mind with opinion
Many come out with "like" and act as true companion
I wish them to come out with critical comments
So break can be applied with no resentment

It creates man to man liking
As reader and as poet much to the disliking
I shall value them most in any enterprise
As they can at any time spring the surprise?

What am I today is of their unstinted support
Otherwise how can the boat reach at the port?
I shall endeavor on their useful advice
Prove true to the expectation without any misses


Comments about No Words To Push by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 8:59:00 PM)


    wooooooow.... irene ndagire12 hours ago All down to earth people deserve this (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 8:59:00 PM)


    Re: No words to push (Score: 1) by Rabbitt on Tuesday, August 28,2012 (19: 35: 31) Sometimes people can relate at some level to what I think is irelevant or trivial. It's amazing. If we have words it's hard to judge the effect on others. Also, some words of mine that I felt were pretty profound, fell upon deaf ears. Keep writing. Best to you from Bob (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 7:24:00 PM)


    LaSoaphia QuXazs
    I am not criticizing you for just anything, I just tell you, that what ever I write or do, I do it for myself, because with our writing we really teach ourselves. If some one can relate, I am happy, but if not, I do not care. And definitely I do not ask people to tell me their opinion if they approve me or not. I need those people who are with me and not those who tells something nice or not nice. Regards
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 8:50:00 AM)


    True


    Farida Amin5 minutes ago
    Well written
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 8:28:00 AM)


    I have no words to push
    As mind has stopped the rush
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 28, 2012



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