Thursday, July 9, 2015

Nonchalance Comments

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What shall I do, What shall I make this painful heart understand
Hundreds of thousands of times I swore to this painful heart
But it doesn't listen to me
Only furnishing your dreams
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Tanuj Nagpal
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Chinedu Dike 16 July 2015

Nonchalant attitude sometimes is an indication of ebbing fascination. I like the articulation of the poem, it's a good piece well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 09 July 2015

When a relationship ends with complete nonchalance from one, That coldness is indicative of not having had real love in the first place. That makes mourning for it all the more sad. Thanks for sharing, Tanuj. Peace

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Fabrizio Frosini 09 July 2015

why those brackets..? ? I mean '' (of love) ''

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