Nonsense Poem! Stop Those Spinning Mills Vs Riddle Poem! Who's You On Mango Trees (Light Verse/Syllabic Verse) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Nonsense Poem! Stop Those Spinning Mills Vs Riddle Poem! Who's You On Mango Trees (Light Verse/Syllabic Verse)

Rating: 4.8


((1)) Rogue-a-vogue Stop Those Spinning Mills
Birl spins
The globe! A non
Sense vehicle's nonstop
cycling in a circle of the
circus: LIFE: a drama with no fullstop,
Just a comma - go up or come tumble-down, be
Humble: YOU: on lucent days glint, on mumpish nights,
Take a dint - life's 24/7 burning on www wheel
Giant with big tops, steep slopes! Stop
those pinning mills stupid,
You are a rogue
Sturm-drang!

((2)) Who's YOU on a Mango Tree: A Riddle
One, two
Three, feel you free
Still if berries won't drop
Drop it thrills: YOU: mount up
mango or coconut trees to tang sweet
Fruits or tender nuts; your fur is so soft with a
Zebra's zigzag stripes fused with black and light glint! You
Have eyes so round go and cover the ground
and swiftly drift on trees countless
I see you: a small thing!
Who's YOU in the
Riddle!

(Form: HARI-GLOBE Syllabic Verse with a syllable
count: 2-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-2) ((A 12 liner)))

Friday, May 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,busy,circus,global,life,lifestyle,light poetry,nature,nonsense,observation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Form: HARI-GLOBE with a syllabic count:
((2-4-6-8-10-12-12-10-8-6-4-2(a 12 liner)
When you take the middle indent a globe or circle appears!

(Named after its shape GLOBE and it's introducer's name HARI
Trunkated from Harindhar Reddy formed on poemhunter in 2020))
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 08 May 2020

beautiful expression about life, work...specially on writing life through wonderful syllabic form...nice creativity

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Harindhar Reddy 18 May 2020

So nice of you friend, thank you for such amazing review 🙏🙏👍👍

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