Noons High Tide Poem by Eric Elliott

Noons High Tide

Rating: 4.5


Under noons high tide the bodys of dead rot
and the birds that are left with out seed
Shrivel under the suns heat but what
did I think would happen, them left with out feed

I've seen dogs and the bodys they eat
the places they'll go and where they've been
I smell decayed meat
only then I look down, with eys of mere men

a puppy bloodly and beaten
the birds over head swoop down at him
I hold him trying to get away

But I fall and are pray
I trade my eye for his life
now he is mine and will stay at my side

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Autumn Jones 17 August 2009

I like the rhyme and the story you are telling. It is a little too dark for my taste but still was interesting to read. Thanks. I give it a 9.

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