These hands
Are just the illusion
Of the wings…
I can’t fly
Anywhere…
Now, it's no doubt.
My blazing kingdom
Has melted
In the sky.
He Has nailed me,
To the ground
With nostalgia...
Tsira: Powerful, haunting, and lyrical. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this. -G
Nostalgia should make one soar too...Experienced that before? ? Cheers. Subroto
THW LAST THREE LINES FINISHED THE POEM VERY WELL......10
An excellent and well crafted write! A well deserved 10+++ Thanks for inspiring me and the whole world! Thanks also for sharing, Love and Peace for always1...
What a marvelous poem you have written here, Tsira. Very lovely indeed.10+
Lol! You write beautifully Tsira! And I see you fly like a butterfly to a certain extent!
These hands Are just the illusion Of the wings… Magnificent writing...Your words embrace your feelings so profoundly...10+++
wow, tsira, you play magic with the words....the last line is mesmerizing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Tsira.. About your poem... succinct. and readable..and a little heartsick.....10+