These hands
Are just the illusion
Of the wings…
I can’t fly
Anywhere…
Now, it's no doubt.
My blazing kingdom
Has melted
In the sky.
He Has nailed me,
To the ground
With nostalgia...
you beautifully weave in the idea inside your mind...yes; illusions are our only wings...thanks Tsira...10
THW LAST THREE LINES FINISHED THE POEM VERY WELL......10
Nostalgia should make one soar too...Experienced that before? ? Cheers. Subroto
An excellent and well crafted write! A well deserved 10+++ Thanks for inspiring me and the whole world! Thanks also for sharing, Love and Peace for always1...
What a marvelous poem you have written here, Tsira. Very lovely indeed.10+
Lol! You write beautifully Tsira! And I see you fly like a butterfly to a certain extent!
These hands Are just the illusion Of the wings… Magnificent writing...Your words embrace your feelings so profoundly...10+++
wow, tsira, you play magic with the words....the last line is mesmerizing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'He Has nailed me, To the ground With nostalgia...' O the excellent lines if I could write! So lucid and so deep! ! 10+++