Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,023 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Not All May Be - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Not all may be feeling same
But for that He is not to be blamed
Many God fathers have taken his place
For deprived people not to make chase

If any one was to feel high
Nobody would have been left and dry
Innocents are killed in day light
Who says men fear from Almighty's might?

All said and not done
It is momentary burst of bubbles
That remains for a while and gone
Everybody is aware that we are on heap of rubbles

We go to churches, mosques or temples
"That to show how religious we are' as samples
We pray only to come out from fishy affair
Only God may know what will be fair?

I blame no one as I am one of the same
Same origin and thoughts from where they came
We try to cheat almighty with unclear conscience
How can we then put on him for fair reliance?

I spend sleepless night when cry in bed
All those years were ruthlessly led
That cry from innocent people makes me restless
So far I have lived with double face

Can't we think in simple manner?
We have to go to him later or sooner
With what face we may reply to our sins?
Will then it be our biggest achievement or win?

It is open to all people who owe their existence out of clay
No matter how long they rule or hold the sway
Nothing can prevent them from being taken away
This is what He has carved out a simple way


Comments about Not All May Be by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2012 7:15:00 PM)


    Re: Not all may be (Score: 1)
    by nprimemin on Saturday, September 01,2012 (13: 21: 37)
    Questions the questions of our shortcomings and mortality.
    If only a sample

    Got a lot out of this one very thorough some typos but you did it proud
    Looking forward to reading more from you.

    Nelson
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2012 8:08:00 AM)


    Re: Not all may be (Score: 1)
    by induce on Friday, August 31,2012 (09: 02: 44)
    Jadia470au,

    'I spend sleepless night when cry in bed
    All those years were ruthlessly led
    That cry from innocent people makes me restless
    So far I have lived with double face'

    This is just one stanza that stood out to me. It is very strong and meaningful in your context, I respect your words and the meaning I try to see, it does leave me with thought/s.

    keep penning,
    induce...andYe
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:49:00 AM)


    great job

    Lillie Mendez7 minutes ago
    nice poem!
    Comment +1
    a poem of all
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:48:00 AM)


    Alan Green 'Guppyman'10 minutes ago
    the poet tells of no escape from a day of judgement
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2012 6:48:00 AM)


    Not all may be feeling same
    But for that He is not to be blamed
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012



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